Tuesday 23 June 2015

my wings story

WALT write creatively with  lots of descriptive language 

so if i woke up with wings i would tell my family and friends i started said "I'm going to France ".So I started going to France ,finaly I was in Paris.I went to a restaurant and are some snails they yum! After that,I went and saw the Eiffle tower it was amazing but I knew I should start going home .I started to fly it was a long way,when I was just about home I started falling ,luckily someone was throwing out a matress.bong! bong! my beautiful wings were gone.I walked home,  my parents asked me where I went. I said I just went shopping with my friend.

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