WALT write creatively with lots of descriptive language
so if i woke up with wings i would tell my family and friends i started said "I'm going to France ".So I started going to France ,finaly I was in Paris.I went to a restaurant and are some snails they yum! After that,I went and saw the Eiffle tower it was amazing but I knew I should start going home .I started to fly it was a long way,when I was just about home I started falling ,luckily someone was throwing out a matress.bong! bong! my beautiful wings were gone.I walked home, my parents asked me where I went. I said I just went shopping with my friend.
What? W.A.L.T write a recount step by step and in order
I started my Monday morning in bed, just as I opened my eyes mum came in to wake me up but obviously I was already awake it was 7.00 when she came in .
So I got up and went to the toilet. Then I go downstairs ,and tell mum what I want for breakfast ,while she makes me breakfast I get dressed . After that I go back upstairs, to do my teeth and hair then, sometimes I wait for my sister and mum ,but normally I go to the toilet again.
Later I go downstairs and get my school bag and put my lunch box in and my drink bottle in it.
Finally we all go outside or in the garage and get into the car on the way I say goodbye to our rabbit.