Thursday 8 September 2016

Brianna Persuasive Writing

Introduction:
Do you like school uniform because I know I don’t and that’s why I think we shouldn't wear school uniform.

Paragraph 1:
My first reason is It is way to expensive to buy school uniform It costs 108 dollars for a jersey top and shorts/culottes If clothing is ripped or needs replaced it is cheaper to replace if it is mufti.

Paragraph 2:
My second reason is we hardly ever wear mufti we hardly ever wear mufti and It’s not fair if our parents or us spend lots of money on clothes that we hardly ever wear and we only wear it 2 days a week

Paragraph 3:
My third reason is it is not comfortable for some people in uniform In summer when it 30 degrees we are burning to death because we have to wear these really thick clothes and when you go to get your school uniform you might not be able to find your size or it might not fit your body type.

Conclusion:
In conclusion if you don’t think that we shouldn’t wear school uniform well you just don’t know what your talking about.







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