my wings story

WALT write creatively with  lots of descriptive language 

so if i woke up with wings i would tell my family and friends i started said "I'm going to France ".So I started going to France ,finaly I was in Paris.I went to a restaurant and are some snails they yum! After that,I went and saw the Eiffle tower it was amazing but I knew I should start going home .I started to fly it was a long way,when I was just about home I started falling ,luckily someone was throwing out a matress.bong! bong! my beautiful wings were gone.I walked home,  my parents asked me where I went. I said I just went shopping with my friend.

Briannas work on words

                                                                                  16 June 2015

What? WALT we are learning to learn our spelling words.

So what? Practised spelling my words in chalk and made up sentences. 

My next step is to post more spelling words on my blog and use my new words in my writing. 

These are my spelling words.

What? W.A.L.T write a recount step by step and in order                

So what? 

I started my Monday morning in bed, just as I opened my eyes mum came in to wake me up but obviously I was already awake it was 7.00 when she came in .

So I got up and went to the toilet. Then I go downstairs ,and tell mum what I want for breakfast ,while she makes me breakfast I get dressed .

After that I go back upstairs, to do my teeth and hair then, sometimes I wait for my sister and mum ,but normally I go to the toilet again.

Later I go downstairs and get my school bag and put my lunch box in and my drink bottle in it.

Finally we all go outside or in the garage and get into the car on the way I say goodbye to our rabbit.

Now what? My next step is to write more.